The feedback I received on
my second elevator pitch was overall very positive. The only suggestions were
to mention what type of food I would be serving and to stand up. I’ve actually
kneeled in the last two pitches so that I would be at the height of my computer
but not sitting at it. I tried to make it more noticeable for this pitch but I
don’t know if I succeeded. In general, I was once again surprised by the positive
feedback that I received and didn’t find any feedback to be wrong or silly.
Based on the feedback that I received on
my last elevator pitch, I tried to mention the general kind of food that I plan
to serve at Mugged. I didn’t want to go into depth with a list so I just briefly
mentioned that the menu would include comfort food and delicious desserts. I
think that these two things really encompass what I’ll be serving since comfort
food is such a broad category of food and overall it lets people know that
Mugged would be serving things other than just soup.
